October 15, 2008

Episode 5 - Smoke Break [part 5]

FADE IN:

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

Behind the Easy--RYAN, JACK, and KALIM are standing outside on break; Ryan, smoking, huddles near a trashcan turned ashtray while Jack stands by his side. Kalim, a ghetto black man of Jack's height with a sculptured haircut, chats mildly with his surroundings.

RYAN

He's a butcher, man.

KALIM (O.S)

That's what's up.

A pause, Ryan takes a drag of his cigarette. Exhale.

RYAN

You're lucky I let you take this break, guy. I didn't get any breaks my first day. Bullsh*t, anyway: 24 hours.

JACK

I appreciate it.

RYAN

Yea.

Ryan puffs smoke in Jack's direction and Jack tries to fan it away. He moves closer as to escape the cloud of smoke. Jack swallows--

JACK

What was that about Mr. Frank just now? Cold-blooded killer?

RYAN

Ya.

JACK

{That's neat. But how do you know?}

RYAN

Kalim told me. (a beat)

He spits the truth.

Kalim huddles behind Ryan.

KALIM

Yea, man, want me to tell him?

RYAN

Tell him, man.

KALIM

Lemme spin it for ya real quick.

RYAN

Ayuh.

Kalim pushes through Ryan and begins to rhyme with theatrics; Jack, his audience.

KALIM

I'm gonna kick it from the start

Trick ya wit my art

Show ya somethin

I got it

From the blackest streets at night

Excite

Givin you a fright

Dash it wit some pepper

Let's make it mo' better

Than the sickest bloodshed

Wastin' all those suckas dead

Cap 'em in the head

Or with a knife

His own wife

Strife!

A body lines the flower bed.

Kaium falls back, empowered, confident, as he finishes his performance. Ryan looks amused.

KALIM

That's for real, son!

Jack is confused, wearing a face that expects Kalim to tell the part of the story that makes sense.

JACK

Huh?..

RYAN

Mr. Frank killed his wife--murder.

JACK (unbelieving)

That's for sure.

KALIM

It's da truth, yo; he ain't never liked that ho. Aha (cackle)!

RYAN

please.. it's like, Mr. Frank finds out his wife is cheating on him; he just...did away with her.

JACK

Did away with her?

RYAN

Yea, like i said. (a beat)

Killed her.

Ryan flicks his cigarette.

Jack's eyes seem to be looking through it all: an expression of deep thought. Ryan gives him a look over.

RYAN

Man, it's like this:

INT. DINING ROOM - NIGHT

Mr. Frank and his WIFE--a short, slender brunette of middle age, are eating a steak dinner at the table. Wife is trying to hide her years, mocking with makeup and a bogus hairdo. The room is well furnished with upperclass dining-ware. Husband and wife exchange few words in MUTE.

RYAN (narr.)

You know, couples get older. The grow apart, to the point where every conversation is about what movies are coming on tonight, their nephew's birthday, cholesterol.

INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

Frank shaves in front of a mirror. Below the mirror, a fancy porcelain sink. He uses an old-fashioned straight razor, taking his careful time.

RYAN (narr.)

No life in it.

Wife enters. With a wretched face she complains on MUTE. Startled, Frank knicks his neck with the razor and is shot off into an argument with Wife.

RYAN (narr.)

And it doesn't help that she's a total bitch.

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

Ryan coughs at the realization of Jack's misunderstanding. He looks around to find where Kalim has gone off to.

RYAN (calling)

Kalim! Hey! He doesn't get it. Take two.

Kalim dashes toward Jack, eagerness in his step.

KALIM (in flow)

Ok, aight

It goes like this

It's night

strange and mysterious

The sky closed up now the fury comes down

Repaying vengeance--you can't see when you look around

Cuz it be goin on inside; indoors, interior

Frank, he chillin in the kitchen, his hand on the trigger

Cutlery, wood block, Wusthof brand

High carbon - Stainless steel, an omen in his hand

A call from the steps, the Mrs. on the prow

INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT

Frank is alone in the kitchen, at the countertops. He stands in front of a wood block of knives admiring a chef's knife; turns it over in his hands. He looks up alarmed when his wife calls:

WIFE (O.S.)

FRANK! I need you upstairs, now!

INT. STAIRCASE - NIGHT

Wife looks down from the balcony in the direction of the kitchen. Her eyebrows curl into a glare. Impatient.

WIFE (calling)

It's the drain again; clogged!

INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT

Frank is nowhere to be found. The knives are scattered and one is missing.

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

[same as before]

Kalim continues flowing without skipping a beat.

KALIM (in flow)

She makes it down in time to find

the missing Frank and the scattered left-behinds

she scans the kitchen and not the pantry

where her surprise/demise is waiting patiently

Behold--

INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT

Wife enters kitchen frame. She seems to be alone in the room. Her eyes frantically pass over every detail in the room. Where is Frank?

She looks now to the the cabinet under the sink. She opens it and retrieves a bottle of DRAIN-O (low-shot).

She gives a suspecting glare to the half-ajar pantry door

> then prances hurriedly out of the room.

INT. PANTRY - NIGHT

Light seeps in through the crack in the door. Frank is crouched under shelves of snack foods and canned goods. The chef knife in his hand casts an eerie gleam.

INT. FOYER - NIGHT

Wife goes to the mirror above a small table and gives herself a look over. On the table is a standing picture frame with Frank's picture inside. She flips it down.

INT. STAIRS - NIGHT

Wife ascends stairs harshly. Frank appears in the frame and carefully follows her, making no sound.

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

[same as before]

KALIM (in flow)

She needs to get a grip

She needs to turn around

But when Frank closes in

He don't make a sound

(For the kill)

She is unawares and stares up straight ahead

She go to po the draino take a bath then go to bed

But when she doesn't have clue

Frank knows just the thing to do--

INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

[same as before]

Wife stands in front of the bathtub and unscrews the draino cap. Behind her is Frank.

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

[same as before]

KALIM (in flow)

He pulls the plug with a tug at her wrist

She's stuck in his grasp- a clasp. He cannot miss!

INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

[same as before]

Frank makes a sharp snatch at his wife's wrist (Wife yelps) and yanks her around (she faces him). She drops the bottle of draino and it spills into the tub down the drain.

a short CUT TO: EXT. THE EASY - DAY

Kalim's eyes are huge as he casts the most bizarre expression. A mad gaze.

quick CUT TO: INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

Shrill screams

and Frank delivers countless jabs with the blade. He tears at his wife and pulls the blood from her. She falls into the tub and her blood spills around the tub basin.

Blood seeps down the unclogged drain.

EXT. THE EASY - DAY

[same as before]

RYAN (smirking)

Yea...

Jack is thinking. He runs around the corner to look into the diner windows. Hands on the window pane, he looks to the empty corner booth.

FADE TO BLACK